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		<title>By: kd</title>
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		<description>Kasey, thanks for posting these.  I got a couple of rejection letters this year from the query so I know I definitely have to shape them up.  I revamped [5th draft of this query over the last 2 years] and already I see a MAJOR difference and by revising it I decided to add a little spin.  So I&#039;ve got a few chapters to rewrite but this definitely makes the overall story better. Rejections are good, because they allow you to rethink your story, through the query submission process and help you tighten your craft for submission.  The query is the &#039;sales&#039; sheet so you really have to make sure it delivers.  Thanks so much and... a new fan!</description>
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